Totally agree with others that it is well written. The suspense of the characters made me want to read more. Shower scene was very hot , I could see them so clearly
Hey! Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment. I’m glad you liked it (it’s one of my favourites). Did you get to read the second part? Cheers, Blake
Thanks David, good to get some feedback! I hope you won’t be disappointed. the final should be out soon. In the meantime you can check this out. Cheers!
Totally agree with others that it is well written. The suspense of the characters made me want to read more. Shower scene was very hot , I could see them so clearly
Thank you Gary! I hope you’ll also enjoy part 2. Cheers, Blake
really good story totally enjoyed it and the added bonus it takes place in the UK. nice.
Hey! Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment. I’m glad you liked it (it’s one of my favourites). Did you get to read the second part? Cheers, Blake
no, I didnt I think its for paid subscribers?
It should also be free... check it out and if I'm wrong get back to me and I'll fix it. Cheers
Well written. Loved the interaction of the characters as they got to know each h other. The shower dream sequence was very hot and erotic.
Can't wait for the next part. ❤️
Hi Joshua, thank you very much! If the link to part two doesn't work, just look up for it on my profile. Blake
Awesome sir
Hot Love it. Thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll like the second part! Blake
Well written. Loved the interaction of the characters as they got to know each h other. The shower dream sequence was very hot and erotic.
Can't wait for the next part. ❤️
Thanks David, good to get some feedback! I hope you won’t be disappointed. the final should be out soon. In the meantime you can check this out. Cheers!
https://substack.com/home/post/p-175266221
Blake, thanks for the link. Great story and loved the way it flowed. Hope there is more of Seb's story.
So hot!
Thank You! I hope you’ll like the second and last chapter!
@Steve Rentschler thank you for restacking!
You're welcome.
Nice build. Tension in the ramp phase. Path to a good story cumming.
Thanks Mark ! Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank You for reading it and your comment! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Blake