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Gary's avatar

Totally agree with others that it is well written. The suspense of the characters made me want to read more. Shower scene was very hot , I could see them so clearly

Blake Wex writes's avatar

Thank you Gary! I hope you’ll also enjoy part 2. Cheers, Blake

Mizieya's avatar

really good story totally enjoyed it and the added bonus it takes place in the UK. nice.

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Hey! Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment. I’m glad you liked it (it’s one of my favourites). Did you get to read the second part? Cheers, Blake

Mizieya's avatar

no, I didnt I think its for paid subscribers?

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It should also be free... check it out and if I'm wrong get back to me and I'll fix it. Cheers

Joshua Barber's avatar

Well written. Loved the interaction of the characters as they got to know each h other. The shower dream sequence was very hot and erotic.

Can't wait for the next part. ❤️

Blake Wex writes's avatar

Hi Joshua, thank you very much! If the link to part two doesn't work, just look up for it on my profile. Blake

Ron's avatar

Awesome sir

Brian Evans's avatar

Hot Love it. Thank you.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll like the second part! Blake

Dave's avatar

Well written. Loved the interaction of the characters as they got to know each h other. The shower dream sequence was very hot and erotic.

Can't wait for the next part. ❤️

Blake Wex writes's avatar

Thanks David, good to get some feedback! I hope you won’t be disappointed. the final should be out soon. In the meantime you can check this out. Cheers!

https://substack.com/home/post/p-175266221

Dave's avatar

Blake, thanks for the link. Great story and loved the way it flowed. Hope there is more of Seb's story.

Kabir Altaf's avatar

So hot!

Blake Wex writes's avatar

Thank You! I hope you’ll like the second and last chapter!

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@Steve Rentschler thank you for restacking!

Steven Rentschler's avatar

You're welcome.

Mark Dean's avatar

Nice build. Tension in the ramp phase. Path to a good story cumming.

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Thanks Mark ! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Thank You for reading it and your comment! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Blake